- Before
- Re-reads a 45-minute script against 22 rubric components for two to three hours a write-up, often at night, between lunch duty and discipline.
- Now
- Opens a script already tagged, with levels proposed only where the rubric's wording fits, and spends her time on the tag or rating that needs her judgment.
One teacher evaluation, from the observation script to signed, released feedback
Jonathan Pruitt teaches Grade 5 at Halvery Elementary in Marlow Bay Unified School District and has been on improvement plan IP-2026-014 since September 8, for questioning and student engagement. His assistant principal, Simone Okafor-Grant, scripted his math lesson on Wednesday, October 14. Here is that teacher observation, screen by screen, in the working solution.
- 01Monday, October 19
What needs her today, ordered by deadline
Simone Okafor-Grant · Assistant PrincipalSimone evaluates 15 teachers. Her home shows four plain numbers, the work that needs her and a briefing from the agents: Jonathan Pruitt's written feedback is due in 2 school days, and notices for three formal observations on Thursday must go by 5:00 p.m. under Article 12.2. Released inside the clock so far: 22 of 22.
- 02Before she opened it
Every line of the observation script tagged to the rubric
Intake and Tagging agentsThe Intake agent brought in the 15-line script, a 2-page lesson plan and Jonathan's self-reflection, masked 11 student names as S1–S27 labels and skipped 3 coaching notes. The Tagging agent placed 25 tags on 14 lines, each with its confidence, and the rubric map beside the script reads 16 of 22 components with evidence.
Written feedback due Wed, Oct 21, in 2 school days under Article 12.4; if late, the visit cannot count as formal observation 2 of 3.
- 03One click on 3b
A level only where the rubric's own wording fits
Tagging agentFor 3b Questioning and discussion the agent proposes Effective, wording match 0.88 on two lines: at 9:21, 22 of 27 students talking about S7's area model, and at 9:24, "Say more. How do you know?" It also shows what it weighed against that: the 9:09 recall question. Levels were withheld on 2b, 3a and 1d, and the components with no evidence yet become the Look-for list for the November 18 visit.
"Most questions ask students to explain their thinking, and many students take part in the discussion." Rubric v4 · 3b · level 3
- 043:13 p.m.
One tag removed, with a reason
Simone Okafor-GrantAt 9:40 the agent tagged 2b Culture for learning at 0.72 on a line about one student reading a library book after finishing early. One student says little about the culture of the whole class, so Simone removes the tag with the reason "Over-reads the evidence". The reason stays with the record and goes to the agent's review set.
S8 and S21 finished the set at 9:38; no extension task; S21 reads a library book until 9:43.
- 05The draft
Teacher observation feedback in her voice, every sentence cited
Feedback agentThe draft runs in five parts — the lesson, each plan goal, checking for understanding, and questions for the post-observation conference — written in Simone's voice from her 38 released write-ups. The sentence that rested on the removed tag is struck, so the draft now carries 15 citations, and each one opens its script line, artifact or rubric wording.
dropped: rested on the tag you removed
- 063:24 p.m.
She decides each rating and signs
Simone Okafor-GrantSimone keeps the proposed levels — 3b Effective, which meets goal 1, and 3c Student engagement Developing — and leaves 1d, 2b and 3a not rated this visit. She signs version 2 with an attestation: 6 components rated, 3 not rated, 1 tag removed with its reason.
"I observed this lesson; the script is my record; I decided each rating."
- 073:31 p.m.
A second person checks the procedure, not the ratings
Renée Castellano · PrincipalRenée runs the release check: notice at least two school days before the visit, sent October 8; feedback inside 5 school days, with 3 used; every rating cites a line and the rubric wording; both plan goals addressed; student names masked and no coaching evidence. She confirms and releases it to Jonathan and the evaluation records system. Simone cannot run this check on her own observation.
- 084:05 p.m.
The teacher adds his own evidence and responds the same day
Jonathan Pruitt · Grade 5 teacherJonathan sees each rating with the lines behind it. He adds a photo showing the class has 7 fraction-strip sets for 13 pairs, with his October 2 request for more, and the exit-ticket results: 21 of 27 correct on all three problems. The same agents tag his evidence, and his written response is attached to the record under Article 12.5.
- 09Grievance-ready
The improvement plan file keeps itself
Due-Process agentWith the October 14 visit released, Jonathan's plan file passes all 14 grievance-ready checks: notice of deficiencies, human resources review by Gloria Teshome, the plan meeting the association representative attended, coaching attendance with content kept confidential, and every formal observation on its date. Goal 1 is met; goal 2 is still Developing, with the third formal observation set for November 18.
- 10The pattern
Her afternoon ratings run lower, and she decides what to do
Drift agentAcross Simone's 61 observations, Domain 3 averages 2.6 after 1:30 p.m. (19 visits) against 3.1 before (42); her peers' gap is 0.1. The agent calls it a pattern, not a finding, shows its sample sizes and changes nothing. Simone plans a co-observation with Renée on Monday, October 26 at 2:10 p.m.